SYSTEM OF A DOWN - "atwa4" Tablature

This is one of my first tabs... any input please let me know

Artist: System of a Down
Title: A.T.W.A.
Album: Toxicity
Transcribed by: Rob Braniger
Email: terob44@hotmail.com
Tuning: Drop D ... Could use Drop C just move down a step

E|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
B|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
G|----1---|----0---|----3---|----5---|----6---|----5---|----3---|----1---|
D|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
A|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
D|-3----3-|-1----1-|-5----5-|-6----6-|-8----8-|-6----6-|-5----5-|-3----3-|

intro

E|--------|---------------------------------------------------------------|
B|--------|---------------------------------------------------------------|
G|--------|---------------------------------------------------------------|
D|3333333-|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|3333333-|---------------------------------------------------------------|
D|3333333-|---------------------------------------------------------------|

"You dont care about how i feel..."

E|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
B|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
G|----1---|----0---|----3---|----5---|----6---|----5---|----3---|----1---|
D|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|--------|
A|-3----3-|-1----1-|-5----5-|-6----6-|-8----8-|-6----6-|-5----5-|-3----1-|
D|-3----3-|-1----1-|-5----5-|-6----6-|-8----8-|-6----6-|-5----5-|-3----3-|


E|---------|-------------------------------------------------------------|
B|---------|-------------------------------------------------------------|
G|---------|-------------------------------------------------------------|
D|3-3-3-3/4|-------------------------------------------------------------|
A|3-3-3-3/4|-------------------------------------------------------------|
D|3-3-3-3/4|-------------------------------------------------------------|

"I don't see (anymore)..."

There is a variation of the high notes in the intro played again using some effects. I'm still working on it.

Thanks