SIMON SAYS - "Syphon" Tablature

Simon Says - Syphon
tuning: 1.5 steps down and then drop "D" (B,F#,B,E,G#,C#)
by Bobby M. (inbetweenworlds@aol.com)

Light verse x1
C#|----------------------------------------------|
G#|----strum for a while------strum for a while--|
E|--3-------------------4--3--------------------|
B|--2-------------------2--2--------------------|
F#|----------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------|

Heavy verse x1
C#|----------------------------|
G#|----------------------------|
E|----------------------------|
B|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2-3p2p0--|
F#|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2-3p2p0--|
B|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2-3p2p0--|

Light verse: x1

Heavy verse: x1

Light verse: x1:

Prechorus:
x4 x1
C#|----------------------|---------|
G#|----------------------|---------|
E|----------------------|---------|
B|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2--|--3p2p0--|
F#|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2--|--3p2p0--|
B|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--2-2--|--3p2p0--|

Chorus:
x3 x1
C#|--------------------|-----------|
G#|--------------------|----strum--|
E|--------------------|--6--------|
B|--2-2-----10--7--9--|--5--------|
F#|--2-2-----10--7--9--|--5--------|
B|--2-2-----10--7--9--|--5--------|

First chorus ending:
x1
C#|--------------------|
G#|--------------------|
E|----------let ring--|
B|--3p2p0-2-----------|
F#|--3p2p0-2-----------|
B|--3p2p0-2-----------|

Light verse: x1

Heavy verse: x1

Light verse: x1

Prechorus: x1

Chorus: x1

Bridge:
x3 x1 x3 x1 x1
C#|------------|----------------------|------------|-----------|-------------|
G#|------------|----------------------|------------|----strum--|-------------|
E|--------7b--|--------7b------------|--------7b--|--6--------|-------------|
B|--2-x-x-----|--2-x-x------------x--|--2-x-x-----|--5--------|--3p2p0-2-2--|
F#|--2-x-x-5b--|--2-x-x-5b-0-0-0-0-x--|--2-x-x-5b--|--5--------|--3p2p0-2-2--|
B|--2-x-x-----|--2-x-x----0-0-0-0-x--|--2-x-x-----|--5--------|--3p2p0-2-2--|
. . . .

x2 x6
C#|---------|-----------------|
G#|---------|-----------------|
E|----3-4--|-----------------|
B|--2------|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--|
F#|---------|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--|
B|---------|--3p2p0-2-2-0-2--|

First part of Prechorus: x8

Second part of Prechorus: x1

Chorus: x2

First four measures of Bridge: x2
(omit deadened strings in fourth measure second time around)

el fin

first time actually writing down my tabbing of a song. any suggestions about mistakes
i may have made, or suggestions on how to make my tabbing more organized or clearer
would be appreciated.