NON-TOXIC - "Struggle" Tablature

Hello everybody
I wrote this song for my 10-string, if you have a 10-string than is this a good song, I hope.

Tuning:
d
a
e
B
G
D
A
E
B
G

Intro (in quarters)
d--------------------------------------------
a--------------------------------------------
e--------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------
G-------------------------------------------- x2
D------------123213--------------------------
A--------------------------------------------
E--------------------------------------------
B-----000------------------------------------
G--00-----00---------00-000-00-444---45-67654

Verse (in 8t's)
d---------------------9~~--878----------------
a-------------------88---------656------------
e-----------------77---------------0----------
B---------------66-------------------9--------
G-------------55-----------------------6------ x4
D-----------44--------------------------6-----
A---------33----------------------------------
E-------22---------------------------------5--
B-----11--------------------------------------
G--00----------------------------------------0
Just walk with your fingers to the highest string.

Chorus:
d---------------------------------------
a---------------------------------------
e---------------------------------------
B---------------------------------------
G----------------767----888---88-88-8888
D-------------656-----------------------
A----------545-------------------------- x2
E-------434-----------------------------
B----323--------------------------------
G-212-----------------------------------

Verse x4
Chorus x4

Bridge I (this is real bass :) )
d--------------------------------------------------------------------
a--------------------------------------------------------------------
e--------------------------------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------------------------------
G--------------------------------------------------------------------
D--------------------------------------------------------------------
A-------------------------------------------------------------------- x1
E--------------------------------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------------------------------
G-0-0-0-0-0000-0-0-0-0-0000-0-0-0-0000-0-0-0000-0000-0000-123456789~-

Bridge II:
d--------------------------------------------------------------
a--------------------------------------------------------------
e--------------------------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------------------------
G--------------------------------------------------------------
D-------------------------------------------------------------- x2
A--------------------------------------------------------------
E--------------------------------------------------------------
B--------------------------------------------------------------
G-123-0000-345-0000-567-0000-789-0000-0-0-01-0-0-01-0-0-01-000-

Chorus x6

Outro:
d---------------------------------------
a---------------------------------------
e---------------------------------------
B---------------------------------------
G---------------------------------------
D---------------------------------------
A--------------------------------------- x1
E---------------------------------------
B---------------------------------------
G-989-989-987-987---000-212-222-11-1-0-0