BEATS - "Intermediate - Two Beats And A Fill" Tablature

ok these are the beats, i dont know how they sounds cuz i havent got a chance to play these on the set, i made them up on the bus ride home from school.
BEAT NUMBER 1 BEAT NUMBER 2
c|X----------X---| h|xXxd---------XxX|
h|--X-x-x-xxx-x-x| s|oo-o-oooo-ff----|
s|o-----oo-----o-| b|o-o----o--oo-ooo|
b|o-o-oo--oo-o-oo|

ok, this is the fill, fortunatly ive played it on the set and i know it sounds good.
this is almost like a beat into a fill, play the begining slower than the fill!

c|XX--------------------------------X-X-X-X|
h|---x-X-x-------X-----------xxddxxX-------|
t|-o-----o------o-o----tttt-----------o-o--|
s|--o-o-o--oood--o-tttt----ff--------o-o-o-|
b|o--oo-o--o--o--o-oo-oo-oo-o----o-o---oo-o|

submitted bye Tim