BEATS - "Beginner - Epic Beat" Tablature

Sap to you all! My name is Radabe and I decided that I would try my first tab, its just a beat. I think its flippin epic! But please tell me what you think and rate my tab or email me for any queries! Shot, chow, rad!

C = Cymbal
H = Hi hat
S = Snare
B = Bass Drum

C [x---------------][----------------][x---------------][----------------]
H [x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-][x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-][x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-][x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-]
S [----x-------x---][----x-------x---][----x-------x---][----x-----x---x-]
B [xx-x--xx--xx----][xx-x--xx--xx-x--][xx-x--xx--xx----][xx-x--xx-x-x-x--]